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Background Noise; || I can't hear or see you ||
Topic Started: Aug 27 2016, 05:13 PM (518 Views)
Safe Haven
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Bratty Vagabond

Your tiny voice, I can't hear it.

You're face, I can't see it.

Why is it you wear a mask? Why is it you contort you language?

Oh, was that a crack in your clay mask?

Is your plaster failing you, pulling your guise apart?

I can't see you, still, but I can see your veil fraying as your contorted tales of mystery and pure that are your needles that pull along your thread, sewing, sewing, as that thread that your needles pull is snipped away by the sharp blades of reality.

Snipping, snipping.

The blades cut your thread, they cut your veil, your mask, your hiding place, they cut your skin.

They cut your ties, your throat, your being.

They
Never
Stop
Cutting

Yet you continue to hide, to shy away from the blades you can so easily stop with hands turned strong by defiance. Your mask crumbles, hideous from wear and tear and lies.

Can you not hear my voice, not see my face? Is it just background noise to you?

Is it?

No

The mask deafens you. The blades muffle my cries of desperation.

Yet even then, my voice could never reach.

For my mask silences me.

I guess I've devolved, I guess I've fallen from grace.

There isn't any thing I can say, anything I can do.

You'll never listen, I'll never listen.

You won't say hello, I won't say goodbye.

Saying nothing, meaning nothing.

Blind, deaf, mute.

Like ink splattered across the page, my thoughts unravel in a messy, wild haze.

Meaningless drabble crawls across the page, hoping to work it's way into sensibility.

I can't see you, I can't hear you.

You can't see me, You can't hear me.

We're just background noise to each other.

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Le Part 2

Quiet House, Quiet Home

Alone, alone

Silence

Silence is nice

I can think when there is silence

Yet my thoughts, they trail off

is something missing?

My latest creation, I read and re-read it's chicken scratch letters and contemplate

To whom am I writing this for?

To whom am I speaking to?

I reach my mind for answers, until

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Edited by Safe Haven, Aug 28 2016, 03:21 AM.
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Fancy Chicken

You have a way with words! :)
e r r or
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Bratty Vagabond

Not really.

It's just some pointless drabble
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Loneliest Stardust Crusader

I Catman, therefore I am.
WHY ARE WE STILL HERE...Posted Image...JUST TO SUFFER?!
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Merry Chrysler

More cringe ;3
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Orzic Nedbens

Excellent work.
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Bratty Vagabond

wat
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Orzic Nedbens

Your writing. It's good. :D
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Bratty Vagabond

*laugh* Um... no? This is hideous!
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Orzic Nedbens

It's writing about the process of writing on the side, you did better than I have on the topic.
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Bratty Vagabond

Posted Image

Ugh... It's easier to leave this alone, isn't it...?
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