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| Topic Started: Aug 27 2016, 05:13 PM (518 Views) | |
| Safe Haven | Aug 27 2016, 05:13 PM Post #1 |
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Your tiny voice, I can't hear it. You're face, I can't see it. Why is it you wear a mask? Why is it you contort you language? Oh, was that a crack in your clay mask? Is your plaster failing you, pulling your guise apart? I can't see you, still, but I can see your veil fraying as your contorted tales of mystery and pure that are your needles that pull along your thread, sewing, sewing, as that thread that your needles pull is snipped away by the sharp blades of reality. Snipping, snipping. The blades cut your thread, they cut your veil, your mask, your hiding place, they cut your skin. They cut your ties, your throat, your being. They Never Stop Cutting Yet you continue to hide, to shy away from the blades you can so easily stop with hands turned strong by defiance. Your mask crumbles, hideous from wear and tear and lies. Can you not hear my voice, not see my face? Is it just background noise to you? Is it? No The mask deafens you. The blades muffle my cries of desperation. Yet even then, my voice could never reach. For my mask silences me. I guess I've devolved, I guess I've fallen from grace. There isn't any thing I can say, anything I can do. You'll never listen, I'll never listen. You won't say hello, I won't say goodbye. Saying nothing, meaning nothing. Blind, deaf, mute. Like ink splattered across the page, my thoughts unravel in a messy, wild haze. Meaningless drabble crawls across the page, hoping to work it's way into sensibility. I can't see you, I can't hear you. You can't see me, You can't hear me. We're just background noise to each other. Spoiler: click to toggle Le Part 2 Quiet House, Quiet Home Alone, alone Silence Silence is nice I can think when there is silence Yet my thoughts, they trail off is something missing? My latest creation, I read and re-read it's chicken scratch letters and contemplate To whom am I writing this for? To whom am I speaking to? I reach my mind for answers, until Spoiler: click to toggle
Edited by Safe Haven, Aug 28 2016, 03:21 AM.
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| cipher | Aug 27 2016, 09:47 PM Post #2 |
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You have a way with words! :) |
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| Safe Haven | Aug 28 2016, 03:03 AM Post #3 |
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Not really. It's just some pointless drabble |
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| Catman | Aug 28 2016, 03:04 AM Post #4 |
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Loneliest Stardust Crusader
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I Catman, therefore I am. |
WHY ARE WE STILL HERE... ...JUST TO SUFFER?!
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| Safe Haven | Aug 28 2016, 03:22 AM Post #5 |
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Merry Chrysler More cringe ;3 |
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| Nedben | Aug 28 2016, 04:07 AM Post #6 |
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Excellent work. |
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| Safe Haven | Aug 28 2016, 04:48 AM Post #7 |
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wat |
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| Nedben | Aug 28 2016, 02:52 PM Post #8 |
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Your writing. It's good. :D |
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| Safe Haven | Oct 30 2016, 10:04 PM Post #9 |
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*laugh* Um... no? This is hideous! |
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| Nedben | Oct 30 2016, 10:13 PM Post #10 |
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It's writing about the process of writing on the side, you did better than I have on the topic. |
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| Safe Haven | Oct 30 2016, 10:16 PM Post #11 |
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![]() Ugh... It's easier to leave this alone, isn't it...? |
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